From 9bbfbddabfb77adaae5cde3c0c68e655039bd7c1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: vsavkin <vic.savkin@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 8 Jul 2021 20:30:54 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] fix(repo): adjust the language in the readme

---
 README.md                              |  6 +++++-
 nx-dev/nx-dev/pages/angular.tsx        |  9 +++++++--
 nx-dev/nx-dev/pages/index.tsx          | 19 ++++++++-----------
 nx-dev/nx-dev/pages/react.tsx          |  7 +++++--
 scripts/readme-fragments/what-is-nx.md |  6 +++++-
 5 files changed, 30 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-)

diff --git a/README.md b/README.md
index dcda670909..78cf4bae41 100644
--- a/README.md
+++ b/README.md
@@ -19,7 +19,11 @@ width="100%" alt="Nx - Smart, Extensible Build Framework"></p>
 
 🔎 **Smart, Extensible Build Framework**
 
-### Distributed Graph-Based Task Execution and Computation Caching
+Nx is a smart and extensible build framework for monorepos to help you architect, test, and build at any scale — integrating seamlessly with modern technologies and frameworks while providing a distributed graph-based task execution, computation caching, an advanced CLI, editor support, GitHub integration, and more.
+
+### Best-in-Class Support for Monorepos
+
+<strong>Nx</strong> provides distributed graph-based task execution and computation caching.
 
 <strong>Nx</strong> is smart. It analyzes your workspace and figures out what can be affected by every code change.
 That's why Nx doesn't rebuild and retest everything on every commit--<strong>it only rebuilds what is necessary</strong>
diff --git a/nx-dev/nx-dev/pages/angular.tsx b/nx-dev/nx-dev/pages/angular.tsx
index 285a76d1ab..e4f9a8af58 100644
--- a/nx-dev/nx-dev/pages/angular.tsx
+++ b/nx-dev/nx-dev/pages/angular.tsx
@@ -230,9 +230,14 @@ export function AngularPage() {
               <div className="py-32 flex sm:flex-row flex-col items-center justify-center">
                 <div className="w-full sm:w-1/2 flex flex-col justify-between items-start sm:pb-0 pb-10 mt-8 sm:mt-0">
                   <h3 className="text-xl sm:text-2xl lg:text-2xl leading-none font-extrabold tracking-tight mb-4">
-                    Distributed Graph-Based Task Executions and Computation
-                    Caching
+                    Best-in-Class Support for Monorepos
                   </h3>
+
+                  <p className="sm:text-lg mb-6">
+                    <span className="font-bold">Nx</span> provides distributed
+                    graph-based task execution and computation caching.
+                  </p>
+
                   <p className="sm:text-lg mb-6">
                     <span className="font-bold">Nx</span> is smart. It analyzes
                     your workspace and figures out what can be affected by every
diff --git a/nx-dev/nx-dev/pages/index.tsx b/nx-dev/nx-dev/pages/index.tsx
index 71a3bb6488..534c39ad46 100644
--- a/nx-dev/nx-dev/pages/index.tsx
+++ b/nx-dev/nx-dev/pages/index.tsx
@@ -19,9 +19,7 @@ export function Index() {
         <title>Nx: Smart, Extensible Build Framework</title>
         <meta
           name="description"
-          content="Nx is a smart and extensible build framework to help you architect, test,
-        and build at any scale — integrating seamlessly with modern technologies and libraries while providing a
-        distributed graph-based task execution, a robust CLI, computation caching, dependency management, and more."
+          content="Nx is a smart and extensible build framework for monorepos to help you architect, test, and build at any scale — integrating seamlessly with modern technologies and frameworks while providing a distributed graph-based task execution, computation caching, an advanced CLI, editor support, GitHub integration, and more. "
         />
         <meta
           name="twitter:title"
@@ -29,9 +27,7 @@ export function Index() {
         />
         <meta
           name="twitter:description"
-          content="Nx is a smart and extensible build framework to help you architect, test,
-        and build at any scale — integrating seamlessly with modern technologies and libraries while providing a
-        distributed graph-based task execution, a robust CLI, computation caching, dependency management, and more."
+          content="Nx is a smart and extensible build framework for monorepos to help you architect, test, and build at any scale — integrating seamlessly with modern technologies and frameworks while providing a distributed graph-based task execution, computation caching, an advanced CLI, editor support, GitHub integration, and more. "
         />
         <meta
           name="twitter:image"
@@ -44,9 +40,7 @@ export function Index() {
         <meta property="og:url" content="https://nx.dev" />
         <meta
           property="og:description"
-          content="Nx is a smart and extensible build framework to help you architect, test,
-        and build at any scale — integrating seamlessly with modern technologies and libraries while providing a
-        distributed graph-based task execution, a robust CLI, computation caching, dependency management, and more."
+          content="Nx is a smart and extensible build framework for monorepos to help you architect, test, and build at any scale — integrating seamlessly with modern technologies and frameworks while providing a distributed graph-based task execution, computation caching, an advanced CLI, editor support, GitHub integration, and more. "
         />
         <meta
           property="og:title"
@@ -260,9 +254,12 @@ export function Index() {
                 </div>
                 <div className="w-full sm:w-1/2 flex flex-col justify-center sm:pl-16 sm:pb-0 pb-10 mt-8 sm:mt-0">
                   <h2 className="text-xl sm:text-2xl lg:text-2xl leading-none font-extrabold tracking-tight mb-4">
-                    Distributed Graph-Based Task Execution and Computation
-                    Caching
+                    Best-in-Class Support for Monorepos
                   </h2>
+                  <p className="sm:text-lg mb-6">
+                    <span className="font-bold">Nx</span> provides distributed
+                    graph-based task execution and computation caching.
+                  </p>
                   <p className="sm:text-lg mb-6">
                     <span className="font-bold">Nx</span> is smart. It analyzes
                     your workspace and figures out what can be affected by every
diff --git a/nx-dev/nx-dev/pages/react.tsx b/nx-dev/nx-dev/pages/react.tsx
index feba806040..4d56da54d5 100644
--- a/nx-dev/nx-dev/pages/react.tsx
+++ b/nx-dev/nx-dev/pages/react.tsx
@@ -236,9 +236,12 @@ export function ReactPage() {
               <div className="py-32 flex sm:flex-row flex-col items-center justify-center">
                 <div className="w-full sm:w-1/2 flex flex-col justify-between items-start sm:pb-0 pb-10 mt-8 sm:mt-0">
                   <h3 className="text-xl sm:text-2xl lg:text-2xl leading-none font-extrabold tracking-tight mb-4">
-                    Distributed Graph-Based Task Executions and Computation
-                    Caching
+                    Best-in-Class Support for Monorepos
                   </h3>
+                  <p className="sm:text-lg mb-6">
+                    <span className="font-bold">Nx</span> provides distributed
+                    graph-based task execution and computation caching.
+                  </p>
                   <p className="sm:text-lg mb-6">
                     <span className="font-bold">Nx</span> is smart. It analyzes
                     your workspace and figures out what can be affected by every
diff --git a/scripts/readme-fragments/what-is-nx.md b/scripts/readme-fragments/what-is-nx.md
index 9b04316698..4fcfab21c1 100644
--- a/scripts/readme-fragments/what-is-nx.md
+++ b/scripts/readme-fragments/what-is-nx.md
@@ -2,7 +2,11 @@
 
 🔎 **Smart, Extensible Build Framework**
 
-### Distributed Graph-Based Task Execution and Computation Caching
+Nx is a smart and extensible build framework for monorepos to help you architect, test, and build at any scale — integrating seamlessly with modern technologies and frameworks while providing a distributed graph-based task execution, computation caching, an advanced CLI, editor support, GitHub integration, and more.
+
+### Best-in-Class Support for Monorepos
+
+<strong>Nx</strong> provides distributed graph-based task execution and computation caching.
 
 <strong>Nx</strong> is smart. It analyzes your workspace and figures out what can be affected by every code change.
 That's why Nx doesn't rebuild and retest everything on every commit--<strong>it only rebuilds what is necessary</strong>